Mock Exam - How To Improve

Rosie
E/A/A - 15 (high level 3) 
To improve -
Show excellent understanding of the task.
Cover rest of scene and go into more detail of camera angles.
Excellent understanding of representations shown by technical areas.
Make sure every point is relevant to the question.
EX - 15 (high level 3)
To improve -
Frequent textual analysis of the extract.
Full range of examples from each technical area.
Examples that are relevant to the question.
T - 5 (level 3)
To improve -
Use of terminology is accurate and relevant.

Abbey
E/A/A - 16 (low level 4)
To improve - 
Improve on analysis of editing
EX- 15 (high level 3) 
To improve -
Frequent textual analysis of the extract.
Full range of examples from each technical area.
T - 5 (level 3)
To improve -
Use of terminology is accurate and relevant.